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Mar. 6th, 2007 06:01 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
sua_layOkay, tell me what's wrong with the following:
For only a moment, he wondered if he was overreacting. Sometimes dreams were dreams and Trelawney sure had a flare for making utter rubbish sound plausible. He couldn't help thinking about the only time when -- looking back after it had all happened -- her prediction had indeed come true. When Wormtongue had gone to Voldemort.
Good grief! I mean, yeah, when fandoms collide indeed. The funniest thing is of course that this part has already been read by two betas (and by me about a gazillion times), and no one caught the mistake.
I wonder if I should just leave it there... Poor Grima. It's not enough he was Saruman'sbitch goon, now he's Voldemort's too.
*stops making fun of her fic and goes back to actually working on it*
For only a moment, he wondered if he was overreacting. Sometimes dreams were dreams and Trelawney sure had a flare for making utter rubbish sound plausible. He couldn't help thinking about the only time when -- looking back after it had all happened -- her prediction had indeed come true. When Wormtongue had gone to Voldemort.
Good grief! I mean, yeah, when fandoms collide indeed. The funniest thing is of course that this part has already been read by two betas (and by me about a gazillion times), and no one caught the mistake.
I wonder if I should just leave it there... Poor Grima. It's not enough he was Saruman's
*stops making fun of her fic and goes back to actually working on it*
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Date: 2007-03-06 06:49 am (UTC)Also, am I mixing up words again? Isn't that 'flare' supposed to be 'flair'?
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Date: 2007-03-06 05:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-03-06 09:08 am (UTC)btw i havent seen you on msn for ages? you alright?
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Date: 2007-03-06 05:38 pm (UTC)And yeah, for some reason MSN just doesn't like me right now...