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Dear gods. I've been going through you know what fic. After reading about one tenth of the whole thing, I've now deleted thirty unnecessary 'though's. Am I like the queen of repeating useless words? I remember it being 'just' when I wrote my HL saga.

Though. Even though. Good grief! Am appalled!

Does anyone else have these problems???

thehee

Date: 2004-06-27 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-reda.livejournal.com
'though' is one of my favourites, too.
Through in the occasional 'aswell' 'anyway' and 'thus'

that, and the use of out-dated words...

Re: thehee

Date: 2004-06-27 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sua-lay.livejournal.com
I love the out-dated words. It amazes me though [haahaa!] that I have used 'though' in places it doesn't really fit.

Stupid 'though'! It's just as annoying as the good all 'all that'.

Oh the problems one has writing slash...

woe is us...

Date: 2004-06-27 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-reda.livejournal.com
.. you mean the burden we carry....

Date: 2004-06-27 09:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snowgrouse.livejournal.com
Yes. I use "though" everywhere. Another all-too-popular word is "that". And I bet that's the Finnish "että" sneaking into attempted English sentence structures, grrrrh...

Date: 2004-06-27 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sua-lay.livejournal.com
LOL

At least there's no English equivalent of 'niinku'.

Am having a wild time scribbling the fic! Should send Mr. Cuaron a thank you note! He made Snape and Harry look better than ever. Also, Dan Radcliffe has improved! He can actually act! Angst!

squee

Date: 2004-06-27 10:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snowgrouse.livejournal.com
"Like." And I was like, yeah, like, Radcliffe is, like, such jailbait. Like. :D Niinku. ;)

Date: 2004-06-27 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sua-lay.livejournal.com
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!

And you just had to remind me of that! Gah! I can see Ron using that. Yes I can. Like all the time.

Will now go and kill a Weasley!

Date: 2004-06-27 11:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snowgrouse.livejournal.com
NOOOOOOO! Ginger racist! Et tu, Brute!


*Sobs*

Date: 2004-06-27 11:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sua-lay.livejournal.com
:P:P Well, it's my favourite pastime! Oh what to do today? I know! I'll kill a Weasley! Oh jolly good!

And I have nothing against gingers! I mean... I like them! I like blonds as well! And gingers banging blonds and then collapsing on top of them all sweaty and panting!

I think I could use some medication right now...

Date: 2004-06-27 11:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snowgrouse.livejournal.com
Come and poke me on Yahoo, babe. I'm on;)

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